Line for line Valerie transposed his Comedy drama about Southern teenagers to see how Rick would respond to seeing his yet unfinished script already in production

word for word at Parasol Productions

Rick Reinhart was enough out of the loop

to not know that Doming was 'the latest thing" in getting "the inside story

who had moved on after the Umber fiasco

to become "the " screenwriter of the 90's"

 go to guy for literary adaptions and original stories

he had  turned against The New Way

claiming he didn't really know what Alliance Pictures was doing with symbiotics

and codifiers in their scripts

when it was Rick who had dreamed up a good 80% of "the System"

Valerie had recently watched Rick literally  dash to the bathroom when he saw her face.
 

she wondered what new ideas were stirring through Rick's Ruiner mind

and asked a few associates of David's

to make it such that she could have a look

it was different intraneuralling an older person

so many memories

fixed habits

and a  tiredness she rarely felt among her boys and girls

 

Valerie wondered if most men his age could accolade themselves for 7 minutes for eating a grapefruit instead of a bagel

it was morning grapefruit for the rest of the day.

a 20 minute rowing excercise would be followed by another 20 minutes od  youre doing good Rick .youre doing better.everything will be alright.

Valerie didnt bother reading him long enough to ever find out what was so wrong in his life that he needed to constantly tell himself it would be alright.

this man definitely needed some medicine...

twice she fell asleep listening to Rick's intraneurals with a lit cigarette in her hand